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Well, it made me jump.

Just from reading the title, I thought it was going to be a rubbish attempt at being funny or making a madness flash. My, oh my, was I wrong.

First of all, the animation side of it was poor but the sound effects chosen really gave me the creeps such as the laughter and the beeping noises. It sets the atmosphere for something that is going to happen.

Since I had my sound on full blast (because I was listening to music before), I quickly turned it right down when I heard the first clip of white noise or whatever. After a while, I just watched to see what would come up. Nice screamer there, but it would of been much better if the image quality on the finishing image was much higher.

The graphics (although it was filter raped) on the tv also set the atmosphere. This really should have a preloader though. Ah well, anyway, I give this a 5/10.

Excellent.

I'd say this is quite underrated. You've used the filter effects in the animation and it looks great - usually it just looks tacky. Also, the loop was fun to listen to. Gotta love Johnny Cash.

I just think that the text saying 'THE FIRE FLASH' was a bit unneeded but other than that, this was great. 8/10.

Not bad, I guess.

The grafiti art saying 'NEWGROUNDS' looked great. Nice work on that. I think you should of gotten a better loop for audio, though. The loop kept jumping two seconds before it played again.

Try to also draw your own background and to make the animation smooth by speeding up the frame rate. (to something like 25 or 30)

Other than that, keep on working on flash. 4/10.

Cute.

The animation was very cute, the music was great and graphics were brilliant.

Nothing else to say for this though. But it seems like you have the potential to make a decent animation. Why not make a full movie for this song and using the same graphics? That'd be great.

Other than that, this was cute. 6/10.

AbrahamLinconInDaHud responds:

Thanks.

Sorry, but it wasn't very good.

The music was irritating and it didn't loop well, there was no sound effects when the guy shot his gun, there seemed to be no real storyline or plot, and the graphics weren't all that great.

Some of the animation was alright though such as the bird flying. (it looked good for someone who is new to using flash)

Well, practice more on flash. Don't give up because you will improve over time. 2/10 for now.

chillwhale responds:

i actually have been flashing for about 1 year off and on (in the last year there were three months were i had the trial and now i own flash) the next looks and sounds much better its also much longer with a better plot and GOOD MUSIC!!!

The ending gave me a little chuckle.

This is nice for a first flash. The graphics could be better, but as I say, it's your first flash. (or the first one on this site)

The voice acting on the genie could of been clearer but other than that, great first. 7/10.

D3m0n1c707 responds:

thank-you i appreitate your feed-back.

Impressive and great fun to watch.

It would of been better if it lasted longer but seeing how much effort you have put into this (the stick guys having facial expressions and the use of filter effects)it's still great.

Nice choice in music, although MotorHead's 'Ace Of Spades' is a bit overrated and overused. Try use a different song (but obviously of the same genre) for the next flash you make.

Anyway, I can't wait to see your other flashes. 10/10.

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