Score: 10

"The concept makes me cringe... yay!"

submission: Harry The Harlequin Fetus

date: August 17, 2008

first of all, loved the preloader. Cleverly done.

The whole thing, well, great choice in music, like always - Snayk is a fucking god amongst men. Now, I love your art work, it just reminds me (on some of the scenes) of Roy Lichtenstein's work and that makes it very nice to look at. The whole animation really did manage to give me the creeps, and I usually don't get those from your work, even though you make some great trippy material, so good going on that. It was all so nightmare-ish. Me likey.

I swear, Karri, next time you submit movies, you must inform me over MSN because I love your work and would love it if I had you in a cage, in my basement working for me 24/7 with no breaks. Ah well, a man can dream. I struggle to continue writing reviews for your work for some reason - probably because after watching it, I show a bunch of other people the animation - but yeah, now I'll leave giving you a 10/10, a five and a favouriting for the submission.

Score: 10

"No co-authoring!?"

submission: Happy Clock Day 2008!

date: August 16, 2008

I co'ed you last year :(
cute that you made your own flash and cute that you made it about two things you like. Gay love and James Blunt. <3

WOOO, I'd fave this if you used a gif that didn't jitter all over the place and if the music didn't fuck up halfway through D:

<3 10/10

Score: 10

"whoa"

submission: Happy Clock Day 09

date: August 15, 2008

Glad you managed to script it by yourself, which must of taken a while since you're new to flash, and all. The only thing I suggest is practicing voice acting and use smaller brush sizes or get another voice actor.

10/10, happy clock day! <3

Score: 10

"BLACK B, WHITE B."

submission: B Song

date: August 15, 2008

I AM POLITICALLY CORRECT AND I DO NOT LIKE YOU.

<3

Score: 8

"Not bad."

submission: Speak To Me/ Breathe

date: July 30, 2008

I'm a huge Pink Floyd fanatic and I approve of this submission. I fived it while it was under judgement and I fived it again while I was writing this review.

This movie was a nice little watch and I liked how smooth some of the animation was, and no matter what, it was always on sync. I do think you use the filter effects a little less than you were, though - it does make the animation go a bit slow and it'd make flash harder for you to work with.

The graphics, overall, they were pretty nice to look at but I do believe you should practice more on animation, just here and there. I think practicing walk cycles would be essential for you so you could then add more to your animation. I also felt like there wasn't much of a plot going on, but, with the power station near the tree - and seeing the difference in colour in the sky - I felt like there was an idea brewing up.

Anyways: unless if you've already got all of this planned out, maybe you should start planning on what'll happen in the next part of the Dark Side Of The Moon series you're wanting to do. I think it'd be a lovely idea if you managed to pull it all off, but just make sure you're making a storyline from it, too. (maybe with the album's original concept, too, which I believe was birth)

Anyways, I wish you luck on it, if you try to continue it; if not, I wish you luck on any future projects you have. 8/10.

Score: 10

"Pure brilliance in a can."

submission: Batman Continues

date: July 29, 2008

I remember seeing your Doc Ock movie get front page and I loved it - when I saw this hit the portal, just now, I was hoping it'd be just as good... it wasn't... it was better.

The voice acting was clear and the humour you made for this kept me going all the way through. I loved how you guys did (not completely accurate) impressions of the characters, too. Completely hilarious stuff. Good image quality, too.

The movie went all well together and it's good to see this come out when the new Batman movie is out, too. Anyways: this was great fun to watch and I will have to check out all your other stuff when I can, too. Right now, as again, this gets a five from me and I have added it to my favourites, too. 10/10.

Score: 10

"Beautifully eerie yet also slightly cute."

submission: 10 Gnomes 7: the Solitude

date: July 27, 2008

I loved this, it was so simple yet a bit of a challenge, too. I also felt rather eerie playing this but knowing I was finding gnomes, it made it seem rather heartwarming, as well.

The choice of music was brilliant - fitted in well with the whole eerie feeling and it was clean quality, too. The photography was amazing and double kudos for you taking them and putting them to good use. The gnomes' artwork was nice and easy on the eyes; always good, that.

I managed to find nine of the gnomes in three minutes and I finally found the last gnome with 3 minutes to spare. :)
Maybe just one little suggestion: maybe have more areas to visit so it is more of a challenge but even without that, this game was a rather charming little piece. It's beautiful.

I've favourited this, fived it and now I'm boosting the review average with my 10/10.

Score: 0

"In b4 NaziNinja."

submission: Kim Possible Hentai Quiz

date: July 25, 2008

I don't think that making hentai quiz games is at all a good way to try and get into flash. Well, sure, it gets you into the basics of actionscripting and button making, but seriously, that stuff is pretty damn easy. Seriously, to use more of flash's features and to get used to them so it gets easier for you, you must try and make a real animation or game.

I understand that you may be new to flash and all, but still, you'll never become a great flash author if all you can make is hentai games - you get loads submitted every day so try and make yourself different.

When practicing with animation, it'll take ages for you to become something brilliant and all, but heck, it's giving you experience and sooner or later, you'll also be developing your own flash art style. Don't say stuff that will degrade you like 'I can't draw for shit' or anything like that because if you try and put effort into it, even the person who REALLY can't draw to save his/her life can make a decent looking animation. There are different types of animation which you could take up, too - you just have to try experimenting.

Right now, I think this is pretty poor so I am not going to give any stars but what I have given you is advice and I hope you use it as anyone has the power to make something great. I wish you luck on your future projects. 0/10.

Score: 10

"I want my children to look like this."

submission: abscess

date: July 25, 2008

This was amazing as fuck, I swear. The audio used was brilliant and the animation was so smooth and surreal, this'll obviously get knocked down by score when it passes because the Newgrounds public usually can't stand crazy-ass flashes like this, but don't listen to them, this was brilliant.

Good audio quality, clean artwork, and i just love how in most of your work, you just make it look as glitchy as possible. Dude, you deserve front pages more often or something and I hope this gets a trophy as it was ace. Not much I can say more about this so I'll five it, fave it and leave a 10/10.

Score: 3

"Different."

submission: Delaware

date: June 20, 2008

I can see this is your first submission (first flash, too?) and to be fair, I thought it was a bit of a disappointing flash: the graphics were alright, the animation of the explosion ran smoothly and the smoke was nicely done, too but the thing I didn't like about this is that you didn't use voice acting and it wasn't exactly long.

The concept behind the flash (which you explained in the author's comments) is quite humorous, but it didn't go so well into the flash.

Suggestions I have for you: next time you make a flash, if you can, maybe ask on the Newgrounds' flash forum for voice actors - loads of people will be happy to help and spend a bit more time on the length of the flash - no matter how long it takes - the longer, the better.

Right now, I'll have to give this a 3/10 but I'll wish you good look on whatever future projects you do.